Comments on: THE THRILL-SEEKERS 12 – “…No One Can Touch Us!”

By: Jay Potts

Jay Potts — Thu, 04 Mar 2010 13:35:49 +0000

Njeri-

Hey, Njeri! I was pretty happy with the dialogue, too, because there’s some subtext layered in there to go with the character work, and it also established that “Pastor” was just a nickname. The first part of this was actually intended as a bit of a dig at the modern “prosperity gospel” that seems so prevalent these days. Also, this one really cemented my desire to see Ned suffer, because he came off as such a cocky prick. (Is that redundant?)

- JEP

By: Njeri

Njeri — Mon, 01 Mar 2010 19:46:00 +0000

re-reading and I liked this one.

By: Jay Potts

Jay Potts — Sat, 27 Jun 2009 01:55:02 +0000

6/26/09 – The punctuation error AWM pointed out has been fixed. Thanks, Angry White Man!
(Never thought I’d say that…)

- JEP

By: Guess Who

Guess Who — Thu, 25 Jun 2009 14:36:09 +0000

Perhaps you should ask some writer you know to read over your text each week. Then, Angry White Man will have to find something else to grouse about.

By: Jay Potts

Jay Potts — Thu, 25 Jun 2009 12:19:36 +0000

ghettoManga- I appreciate that. Just trying to give the reader something new by way of character, plot, or both every week.

I’ve checked out your site from the link at OldeTowneComix.com. You’re ridin’ the hip-hop bleeding edge over there, so it’s nice to know that I’ve got the chops to hang.

Rodbuddah. Man, that cat’s like the Pope when it comes to spreading the “gospel” of Pastor!

Love the gravatar, by the way. Gotta get one of those…

- JEP

By: ghettoManga

ghettoManga — Thu, 25 Jun 2009 06:25:03 +0000

good old-fashioned storytellin’… found your site thanks to that dude Rod of Planet Griffin. i’ll be around…

By: Jay Potts

Jay Potts — Wed, 24 Jun 2009 20:12:16 +0000

Doug G.-

I wanted to give each of the cockroaches a little moment in the sun.

Also, in a deleted panel, I had Ned wearing Air Force 1’s. Then I realized I didn’t want the St. Lunatic’s demographic. Flip Mode!

- JEP

By: Jay Potts

Jay Potts — Wed, 24 Jun 2009 17:28:30 +0000

AWM- ~~It's~~ ~~Its~~ It's probably a sad, simple fact that I'll probably never get that right. If I'm batting .500 on the its/it's thing, ~~its~~ ~~it's~~ it IS a good day for me. *Sigh* - JEP BTW- I'm Twittering (Tweeting?) now and added The Juice*. I'm at World_Of_Hurt.

By: Angry White Man

Angry White Man — Wed, 24 Jun 2009 16:44:10 +0000

Yeah, Ned looks like a real bastard. Good job. Check your it’s/its again, though, young man.

By: Doug G.

Doug G. — Wed, 24 Jun 2009 15:12:57 +0000

Aw man … great portrait of the weasly Charles last week and now the slimy Ned.

That grin is made all the more sinister by the Magnum P.I. meets ’70s porn star moustache. And I’m assuming that’s a big ol’ snifter of Courvoisier? Busta would be proud.