This particular strip started out in a very different direction. It opened and closed on action, but then I realized I was missing something: I needed to hear Alicia Patterson’s voice. We’d gone twenty-three strips without Alicia ever saying anything. I wanted her to say something, but I wish her first words could have been more profound. I moved the strip I originally was going to use this week to next week. Alicia does indeed have a lot more to say next week, but it’s in a very different, angry context. I didn’t want her first words to be spoken in anger. Does that make sense? To me, it just seemed more fair to her as a character.
Anyway, this gave me the room to work in some character stuff, like Alicia’s work ethic, her initial realization that everything’s not kosher with Charles, Ned and Tuck, and I also got to include an indication of Charles Bouchier’s particular fetish that pays off something I introduced in Episode 11 .
Finally, yesterday, I accidentally posted the blog update I had intended for Friday. I’m running a contest in honor of the new Blaxploitation film, Black Dynamite that is coming to a theater near you on October 16th. Check out the trivia questions, send in your answers, and maybe you’ll have the chance to fight smack in style.
- JEP


I like where this is going… great sleazy vibe! And nothing is sleazier than a bunch of neurotic pornographers!
Andy-
Funny. Although you’ve commented numerous times before, WordPress made me approve your message. Probably because you used the word “pornographer.” However, my Google hits will probably increase now…
I hope you had a good birthday!
- JEP
Love the way the story is unfolding. Keep up the good work. My only critque is the last panel. I think Duke needs an outline or have the black meet up and define some of his contours. He looks a little too loose. I also think this will help the “aura” around Alicia reflect her emotion more.
The Pirate Musketeer-
I agree, the effect isn’t quite what it should be here, but I think I’m on to something with the inking effect. I’ve got to work on it some more.
- JEP
Spotting black areas is a real challenge. That’s why I stick to colour.
I think you made the right choice in introducing Alicia this way.