THE THRILL-SEEKERS 23 – Tell The Truth, Shame The Devil – Part 3

THE THRILL-SEEKERS 23 – Tell The Truth, Shame The Devil – Part 3

This particular strip started out in a very different direction.  It opened and closed on action, but then I realized I was missing something:   I needed to hear Alicia Patterson’s voice.  We’d gone twenty-three strips without Alicia ever saying anything.  I wanted her to say something, but I wish her first words could have been more profound.  I moved the strip I originally was going to use this week to next week.  Alicia does indeed have a lot more to say next week, but it’s in a very different, angry context.  I didn’t want her first words to be spoken in anger.  Does that make sense?  To me, it just seemed more fair to her as a character.

Anyway, this gave me the room to work in some character stuff, like Alicia’s work ethic, her initial realization that everything’s not kosher with Charles, Ned and Tuck, and I also got to include an indication of Charles Bouchier’s particular fetish that pays off something I introduced in Episode 11 .

Finally, yesterday, I accidentally posted the blog update I had intended for Friday.  I’m running a contest in honor of the new Blaxploitation film, Black Dynamite that is coming to a theater near you on October 16th.  Check out the trivia questions, send in your answers, and maybe you’ll have the chance to fight smack in style.

 

- JEP


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  1. Andy says:

    I like where this is going… great sleazy vibe! And nothing is sleazier than a bunch of neurotic pornographers!

  2. Jay Potts says:

    Andy-
    Funny. Although you’ve commented numerous times before, WordPress made me approve your message. Probably because you used the word “pornographer.” However, my Google hits will probably increase now…

    I hope you had a good birthday!

    - JEP

  3. Love the way the story is unfolding. Keep up the good work. My only critque is the last panel. I think Duke needs an outline or have the black meet up and define some of his contours. He looks a little too loose. I also think this will help the “aura” around Alicia reflect her emotion more.

  4. Jay Potts says:

    The Pirate Musketeer-
    I agree, the effect isn’t quite what it should be here, but I think I’m on to something with the inking effect. I’ve got to work on it some more.

    - JEP

  5. Spotting black areas is a real challenge. That’s why I stick to colour. :) I think you made the right choice in introducing Alicia this way.

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