Comments on: THE THRILL-SEEKERS 52 – Mutiny http://worldofhurtonline.com/2010/04/07/the-thrill-seekers-52-mutiny/ Fri, 03 Feb 2012 01:43:27 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8 hourly 1 By: Guess Who http://worldofhurtonline.com/2010/04/07/the-thrill-seekers-52-mutiny/comment-page-1/#comment-1351 Guess Who Fri, 09 Apr 2010 18:51:05 +0000 http://worldofhurtonline.com/?p=2361#comment-1351 I just noticed the poor bastard standing on the bridge. Who is he? Will he become "collateral damage" from our underwater diver's work? I just noticed the poor bastard standing on the bridge. Who is he? Will he become “collateral damage” from our underwater diver’s work?

]]> By: Jay Potts http://worldofhurtonline.com/2010/04/07/the-thrill-seekers-52-mutiny/comment-page-1/#comment-1344 Jay Potts Thu, 08 Apr 2010 12:48:44 +0000 http://worldofhurtonline.com/?p=2361#comment-1344 Mr. Man- I was worried whether or not that second panel would read correctly, so I dropped a tone on the pier to make it pop out a little more. So thanks for the comment, because it alleviated some of my concerns about it. Guess Who- Sshhh! You're gonna give it away... ;) Mell M- I was really pleased with how Tuck turned out. I've always had a problem with that lips-drawn-tight-across-the-teeth scowl. Alan Davis (<em>Excalibur, JLA:The Nail</em>) depicts that look really well. Summey- Thank you, sir! "dollar" Bill- "Quick as a cat, just easin' in." It was so ridiculous watching Tommy Gibbs hitchhike into New York to avoid the mob, but that song is so incredible that it just absolutely sold that moment. Mr. Patton- Thanks for the critique. You made a very good point. Since I knew I was coming up on the one year mark, I think I was just so eager to reach the conclusion that I compressed some details that I would have let play out a little longer before. However, I underestimated the reader's investment in the characters. Thanks again! - JEP Mr. Man-
I was worried whether or not that second panel would read correctly, so I dropped a tone on the pier to make it pop out a little more. So thanks for the comment, because it alleviated some of my concerns about it.

Guess Who-
Sshhh! You’re gonna give it away… ;)

Mell M-
I was really pleased with how Tuck turned out. I’ve always had a problem with that lips-drawn-tight-across-the-teeth scowl. Alan Davis (Excalibur, JLA:The Nail) depicts that look really well.

Summey-
Thank you, sir!

“dollar” Bill-
“Quick as a cat, just easin’ in.” It was so ridiculous watching Tommy Gibbs hitchhike into New York to avoid the mob, but that song is so incredible that it just absolutely sold that moment.

Mr. Patton-
Thanks for the critique. You made a very good point. Since I knew I was coming up on the one year mark, I think I was just so eager to reach the conclusion that I compressed some details that I would have let play out a little longer before. However, I underestimated the reader’s investment in the characters. Thanks again!

- JEP

]]> By: Chuck Patton http://worldofhurtonline.com/2010/04/07/the-thrill-seekers-52-mutiny/comment-page-1/#comment-1342 Chuck Patton Thu, 08 Apr 2010 04:51:37 +0000 http://worldofhurtonline.com/?p=2361#comment-1342 oh, btw---that's some great character drawing and posing on ol' Tuck and Charles in panel one. Somebody's gonna get HURT! oh, btw—that’s some great character drawing and posing on ol’ Tuck and Charles in panel one.
Somebody’s gonna get HURT!

]]> By: Chuck Patton http://worldofhurtonline.com/2010/04/07/the-thrill-seekers-52-mutiny/comment-page-1/#comment-1341 Chuck Patton Thu, 08 Apr 2010 04:48:11 +0000 http://worldofhurtonline.com/?p=2361#comment-1341 Hell Up in Harlem also had an awesome soundtrack too, Jay. And as much as I'm looking forward to Charles and Tuck's comeuppance, I'd like it if you played out their confrontation just a tad more, not only to break up all that dialogue, but to also surprise us to what's coming up in that last panel. This is where "talking heads" can give the drama just a lil' more dynamite before a climax. Think Hitchcock meets Sergio Leone. Just a minor critique on my part, cause I'm loving this tale of Badass Justice with every brush stroke and plot turn. In the words of James Brown, "Now Take it to the Bridge!!!" Hell Up in Harlem also had an awesome soundtrack too, Jay.

And as much as I’m looking forward to Charles and Tuck’s comeuppance, I’d like it if you played out their confrontation just a tad more, not only to break up all that dialogue, but to also surprise us to what’s coming up in that last panel.
This is where “talking heads” can give the drama just a lil’ more dynamite before a climax. Think Hitchcock meets Sergio Leone.
Just a minor critique on my part, cause I’m loving this tale of Badass Justice with every brush stroke and plot turn.
In the words of James Brown, “Now Take it to the Bridge!!!”

]]> By: "dollar" Bill http://worldofhurtonline.com/2010/04/07/the-thrill-seekers-52-mutiny/comment-page-1/#comment-1340 "dollar" Bill Thu, 08 Apr 2010 03:18:54 +0000 http://worldofhurtonline.com/?p=2361#comment-1340 Easin' In! Easin’ In!

]]> By: Summey http://worldofhurtonline.com/2010/04/07/the-thrill-seekers-52-mutiny/comment-page-1/#comment-1339 Summey Wed, 07 Apr 2010 18:41:27 +0000 http://worldofhurtonline.com/?p=2361#comment-1339 Just went back and looked at the whole years worth of strips. And I have to say outstanding job. I am impresssed that you are able to keep the high quailty in every strip. This is going to make one awsome collection when you wrap up this story. Just went back and looked at the whole years worth of strips. And I have to say outstanding job. I am impresssed that you are able to keep the high quailty in every strip. This is going to make one awsome collection when you wrap up this story.

]]> By: MellM http://worldofhurtonline.com/2010/04/07/the-thrill-seekers-52-mutiny/comment-page-1/#comment-1338 MellM Wed, 07 Apr 2010 18:01:31 +0000 http://worldofhurtonline.com/?p=2361#comment-1338 I'm not sure what is better the passion in Tuck's eyes or the "Oh s***" face his sudden uprising has caused in Charles. Can't wait to see how this ends!! I’m not sure what is better the passion in Tuck’s eyes or the “Oh s***” face his sudden uprising has caused in Charles. Can’t wait to see how this ends!!

]]> By: Guess Who http://worldofhurtonline.com/2010/04/07/the-thrill-seekers-52-mutiny/comment-page-1/#comment-1334 Guess Who Wed, 07 Apr 2010 15:44:22 +0000 http://worldofhurtonline.com/?p=2361#comment-1334 Can't wait to see Pastor in that wet suit! ...Assuming that is our favorite hero attaching the bomb to the boat's hull. Can’t wait to see Pastor in that wet suit! …Assuming that is our favorite hero attaching the bomb to the boat’s hull.

]]> By: Mr. Man http://worldofhurtonline.com/2010/04/07/the-thrill-seekers-52-mutiny/comment-page-1/#comment-1333 Mr. Man Wed, 07 Apr 2010 11:19:35 +0000 http://worldofhurtonline.com/?p=2361#comment-1333 the angle of the 2nd panel is righteous!!! the pier and the goon standing it on it were nice touches to add to the perspective.... the angle of the 2nd panel is righteous!!! the pier and the goon standing it on it were nice touches to add to the perspective….

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